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Post by Alfonze Alger on Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:57 am

Naii

di sini tempat berkomentar untuk topik Shein's past, cerita tentang masa lalu karakter saya

http://pandora-hearts.forumotion.net/fiction-and-story-f37/shein-s-past-t97.htm#5612

monggo..

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:49 pm

Nyaha~
Baru baca X3

Ahh, rasanya bunga apa itu namanya..
Identik banget sama Shein ==
Huff~

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:02 pm

rosa alba

ah, saya lupa lanjutin

gara2 si rapen..wkakak

besok lanjut ah

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:04 pm

Hahahah XDD
Lanjut! XD

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Rheaffel on Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:39 pm

Aduh... lagi-lagi ... lagi baca enak-enak, lagi pas yang Akhirnya~ tiba-tiba BERSAMBUNG *dsig gubrak*

serasa nonton KCB deh saya =w=

bikinnya jangan setengah-setengah dong nak... kau ini sudah seperti Yukiru Sugisaki aja yang dikit2 males atau CLAMP yang dikit-dikit ah ada ide baru *dilempar*

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:42 pm

ahaha

habis rasanya kepanjangan

ini kebiasaan buruk saya kalau nulis cerita

suka gak yakin sama diri sendiri..

kepanjangan lah, jelek lah, de-el-el..

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Rheaffel on Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:48 pm

Harusnya tamatkan saja... mau panjang atau pendek lebih baik SELESAI

sebuah karya itu akan dihargai selama proses dan selesainya =w=

IMO kalau saya lebih suka karya yang memiliki Best Ending daripada cerita tengah yang memukai (seperti Code Geass begitu) :3

makanya lanjutin

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:51 pm

kalau saya lebih suka karya yang memiliki Best Ending daripada cerita tengah yang memukai (seperti Code Geass begitu) :3

hmmh, best ending yah

oke, *catat*

sip, besok pagi habis namatin chapter 3 yang raven saya lanjut

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Rheaffel on Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:56 pm

Dan... lol saya sedang menulis sesuatu kok jadinya seperti sedang melanjutkan cerita ini ya --a

OMG whats wrong with our mind

blue toothnya nyala terus jadi weh

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:58 pm

ahahaha

bagus itu..=D

lanjutkan aja sama qwerty-senp..

pantesan..

bluetoothnya masih nyala, jadi nyambung mulu ide2nya..

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Rheaffel on Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:02 am

lol dilanjutkan sama saya apa jadinya ya

---nanti jadinya sesuka saya dong :p

... iya nih bluetooth nyala nggak bisa mati sejak ujian kemaren *halah~*

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Sayoppe on Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:49 pm

nyaaah ! sayo udah baca...dan hasilnya story ini berhasil membuat sayo penasaran dengan kelanjutan ceritanya

ayo bikin lagi ! LANJUTKAN <>

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:56 pm

ya, apalagi chapter 2

kata2 shien bener2 bikin merinding

hih..==a

tunggu omake si Shien

yang ini aja belom slese..wkwk

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Sayoppe on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:00 pm

shien ?
mungkin baca omakenya sambil merem kali yaa ==
serem banget pasti

belom selese ??? BURUAN BIKIN LAGI !

inilah akibatnya kalo bikin story yang membuat sayo penasaran

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:02 pm

[quote]belom selese ??? BURUAN BIKIN LAGI ! [/quote[

wkwkwk..

iyaa..lagi buat yg shien

si Raven udah, Shein udah, tinggal Shien

tabrakan ama Shein pula..errh

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Post by Rheaffel on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:09 pm

Lol... ternyata beneran dibuat sesuai dengan omake buatan saya pake pandangan dari Shein... bagus juga xD~ , sekalian nanti bikin yang diliat dari pandangan Raven juga *dilempar*

... Ah!! Masih bersambung?!
Ayo bikin lanjutannya... dan ingin juga liat cerita yang diambil dari pandangan Shien, mungkin akan nampak beda >w<

Seperti kata SBY saya, LANJUTKAN!

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:13 pm

iyaa..

di sini kayaknya banyak sudut pandangnya..

nanti mau di buat Lacie dan Shiennya

dari sudut pandang mereka..*stress sendiri*

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Post by Rheaffel on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:21 pm

Lol satu kejadian yang diceritakan oleh banyak orang...

boleh juga tuh :3 jadinya asik dan nampak lebih menggambarkan personal tiap karakter...

oke, lanjutkan saja~

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Post by Sayoppe on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:45 pm

nyaaaahh XD
udah dibaca ~BRAVO !

BURUAN BIKIN LAGI !
sayo pengen liat shein seperti apa disaat nonjok orang XD (?)

next chap, kematian shien ya ?

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Shein's past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:46 pm

kagak mati

malah rencananya berjalan berhasil..wkwkwk

masukkin si Stein sama Shein ke abyss

itu rencananya,

terus dia pura2 jadi pahlawan yg mati di perang gitu

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Post by Sayoppe on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:48 pm

WTH ?!

kirain mati, udah bahagia aja sayo ga tau kenapa

kenapa sayo ikut-ikutan benci shien yak gara2 baca omakenya ==

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:49 pm

enggak

si Shein doang yg nyangka kakaknya mati sih..

saya aja yang bikinnya benci minta ampun ama dia..

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Post by Sayoppe on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:52 pm

kok shein doang ? kenapa ?

emang ga beneran mati ?

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:54 pm

si Shein kan di kasih surat itu

surat boongan buatan Shien

jadi dia nulis, bahwa dia sengaja ngirim Shein ke abyss, karena dia sebenernya mau nolongin adiknya sendiri biar gak ikut campur di pertempuran itu..

padahal, ya tau, itu cuman strateginya aja..biar si Shein masuk ke perangkapnya

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Post by Sayoppe on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:57 pm

et...to....

bikin lanjutannya lagi ! wkwkwk XD
buruan bikin

shien itu licik banget sih *nyantet shien*

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