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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:34 pm

ya

untuk cerita RAVEN'S UNKNOWN PAST emang pada di minta di buat sesedih-sedihnya

belom saya buat lagi

mana anak2 forum lain udah ngebet bacanya, saya janjinya besok..==

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by suzurin on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:38 pm

aha suzu jadi inget satu lagi sifat libra boy . <<<sory OOT

bagus , bikin lah sesedih mungkin . sana pergi ke gunung slamet buat cari pencerahan !
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Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:41 pm

satu lagi sifat libra boy? apa?

wkakakak

gunung slamet..

ya, saya sekalian bertapa di sana

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by suzurin on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:45 pm

maf ya .. tapi ini pengalaman pribadi aja kok bos ...

nggak semua sama . ok ?

suka berjanji , meski pas bilang janji itu tulus , tapi ya ... keseringan ga ditepatin ...

ah mo ii !
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:47 pm

oh,

memang kok

tapi untuk beberapa hal saya gak kayak gitu..=D

itu tergantung orangnya aja kok

kalau hal2 kecil saya emang suka lupa, naii

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Rheaffel on Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:00 pm

Saya belum merasakan sedihnya...

Tapi ini GREAT karna lebih panjang *ditampol*

ah ya dan lagi-lagi saya menyoroti bagian gaya penulisannya yang lain, ini bisa menjadi nilai plus... mana lagi rapi >w< kau pintaar~ (pasti nilai mengarangnya bagus :p) ... lalu soal ceritanya ... uh great dibuat bersambung --a ... ayo cepat tamatkaaan~!!! *dilempar*

Well nai... at all bisa saya kasih 8 dari 10 deh :3
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:06 pm

waa..

sankyuu senpai..*sujud2 lg*

memang,

itu nyusunnya agak susah

ngerapihinnya terutama..

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Rheaffel on Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:10 pm

Emang sih... pasti nyusunnya ribet

tapi saya suka tulisan yang agak bolak-balik dan menyisipkan quote (berupa lagu atau apapun) di dalamnya... kesannya jadi bukan sekedar tulisan saja *lol*

Dan nai~ itu sampe chapter 3 ... I hope the best scene for the end xD~
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:15 pm

ahahaha

iya,

lagi nyari pencerahan supaya endingnya bagus

sulit juga..==a..endingnya di buat supaya jelas dan tidak membingungkan..

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Sayoppe on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:08 am

uwooooooeee BRAVO !! hitsuzen dari semua chara kumpul distory itu

aah sayang udah tamat

padahal kalo Eleannya nonjok raven baru boleh tamat *dilempar aad*

uwwwwooooh hebat sekali, menceritakan dari masa lalu sampe ke masa depan raven

kalo ada omake lagi, buat lagi ya !
keep writing

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:13 am

yay~

tamat..

mudah-mudahan jangan ada yang minta di lanjut

nanti kebanyakan spoiler..ahaha

naii..sankyuu..

selanjutnya saya mau lanjut omake Shein yang di telantarkan..wkwk

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Sayoppe on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:25 am

wkwkwkwkwkwk XD
omake shein telantar ? kesiksa dong ??
huweeeh asik !
shein terlantar~


cepat bikin !

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:36 am

wkwkwkwkwkwk XD
omake shein telantar ? kesiksa dong ??
huweeeh asik !
shein terlantar~


cepat bikin !

senang sekali kau..

ahahahha

udahh buat

chapter 1-nya aja..

belom di lanjut tapi

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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"

Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:16 pm

Ahh, akhirnya tamat juga ==
Huhuhu....
Kesian ma Lacie ==
Raven juga...

Nasib Lacie gimana pi?
Dia kan kabur~
Ga dikejar Shien/Shein? ==

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:19 pm

nasib lacie

sebenernya di kejar ama Shien

mau di bunuh

eaaa, spoiler jadinya

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Post by suzurin on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:20 pm

iya .. lacie kasian ditinggal raven ...

tapi cintanya tersampaikan yaaaah ....

epilognya bikin suzu senyum-senyum sendiri nyuuuu
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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:23 pm

Iyah...
Kasian Lacie...
Tak tega daku ini ==

Ahh....
Shien jahatnya dirimu~
Tak tega daku ini....

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:24 pm

si shien

chainnya serem lho..==a

saya ini lagi buat..

ergh

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:25 pm

WA WA WA!! XO
Srem.... jadi merinding tiba-tiba ==

Ahh.... Pasti keren nih RPnya....
PHnya aja keren...

Lacie... Lacie....
Masih kepikiran...

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:28 pm

sekedar bocoran

chainnya si Shien

bekerja hampir sama kayak BLACK HOLE

ukh, saya aja merinding bayanginnya

iyaa..

lacie~

paling di bunuh shien dia

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:30 pm

Waks... Hebat....
Ntar Shien muncul di RP???

AHHH!!!
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Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:30 pm

yep

saya yang mainin..

tapi si shien gak bakal sering muncul kok

ribet ada dia..ahaha

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:32 pm

Aw aw aw........
Makin keren ajah = w =
Oh iya 2nd chara Ulqui lupa diliad lagi~

Nyuuu = w =

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:32 pm

2nd charanya saya periksa nanti malem lagi yah

soalnya itu udah bagus

tinggal saya baca ulang

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:33 pm

Sip sip~

Nyuu~

*Menghilang bikin omake*

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