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Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
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Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:46 pm
Mau ngasih contoh lagi, naii
ini kalau mau buat omake,
commentnya di beda tempat ya,
jadi buat topik kayak gini
ayo, di baca..
https://pandora-hearts.forumotion.net/fiction-and-story-f37/omakeraven-s-unknown-past-t116.htm#8370
BESOK KEMUNGKINAN APDET CHAPTER 2-NYA
ini kalau mau buat omake,
commentnya di beda tempat ya,
jadi buat topik kayak gini
ayo, di baca..
https://pandora-hearts.forumotion.net/fiction-and-story-f37/omakeraven-s-unknown-past-t116.htm#8370
BESOK KEMUNGKINAN APDET CHAPTER 2-NYA
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Ulqui Schiffer Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:51 pm
Mau chapter 2nya sekarang juga = w =
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by suzurin Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:53 pm
hebat . padahal cowok , tapi .... *masih sesengukan*
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:54 pm
@suzu:
ehh..
itu ngerti? katanya tadi gak ngerti?
@atas:
tangan saya pegel2,
saya bangun jam 3 pagi deh buat bikin ni FF, cari ide brilliant dulu..=D
ehh..
itu ngerti? katanya tadi gak ngerti?
@atas:
tangan saya pegel2,
saya bangun jam 3 pagi deh buat bikin ni FF, cari ide brilliant dulu..=D
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by suzurin Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:55 pm
cuma nangis karna kata-katanya doang . prolognya sumpah kaga ngerti ==
uugh ! bete mata ngembeng mulu !
uugh ! bete mata ngembeng mulu !
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:55 pm
sengaja
prolognya kan lagi di toko kaset yang di RP itu lho
tau kan?
Tempat si Raven mainin Lacie Song pake piano
terus si Rio ngeliat Raven
itu semua karakter di cg, naii
prolognya kan lagi di toko kaset yang di RP itu lho
tau kan?
Tempat si Raven mainin Lacie Song pake piano
terus si Rio ngeliat Raven
itu semua karakter di cg, naii
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Ulqui Schiffer Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:56 pm
Ara?
Jam 3 pagi?
Ikut ahh XD
Ntar selesaiin rekues nagi dulu~
Tidur berapa jem nih ntar ==
<-- Biasa tidur 12 jam..
Oh iya, emang kalau lanjut, sampai chapter berapa nih pi?
Jam 3 pagi?
Ikut ahh XD
Ntar selesaiin rekues nagi dulu~
Tidur berapa jem nih ntar ==
<-- Biasa tidur 12 jam..
Oh iya, emang kalau lanjut, sampai chapter berapa nih pi?
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:57 pm
3 aja kali
jangan kebanyakan chapter
SPOILER BESAR BUAT RP DI SINI DAN DI CG
naii..hehe
jangan kebanyakan chapter
SPOILER BESAR BUAT RP DI SINI DAN DI CG
naii..hehe
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by suzurin Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:58 pm
IYA IYA ~!
wew serius suzu nangis . kata-katanya pake "demi tuhan" segala . kuso.
kayak quote qin wei yi sebelom mati .
hhuaaaaaaaaaaaa
wew serius suzu nangis . kata-katanya pake "demi tuhan" segala . kuso.
kayak quote qin wei yi sebelom mati .
kalau aku terlahir kembali , aku bersumpah tidak akan meninggalkan mu secepat ini
hhuaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:59 pm
ehem
saya lagi liat video servant of evil waktu bikin ini..=D
alhasil jadi dapet ide..wkwk
saya lagi liat video servant of evil waktu bikin ini..=D
alhasil jadi dapet ide..wkwk
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by suzurin Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:01 pm
aaah kata-kata "moshimo umare kawareru no naraba" itu memang bikin nangis ya .....
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:02 pm
memang...==
makanya saya cantumkan di situ..
tapi dilebihkan..
Ku mohon,..
Ku mohon..
halah..XD
makanya saya cantumkan di situ..
tapi dilebihkan..
Ku mohon,..
Ku mohon..
halah..XD
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Rheaffel Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:03 pm
Nai~ saya udah baca dan memberikan komen di forum sebelah
intinya, LANJUTKAN... buat lebih panjang...
tamatnya cepet banget, ini seperti cuma spin off padahal saya ingin baca OMAKE!!
intinya, LANJUTKAN... buat lebih panjang...
tamatnya cepet banget, ini seperti cuma spin off padahal saya ingin baca OMAKE!!
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Ulqui Schiffer Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:04 pm
Oh iya..
Yang itu...
Inget Servant of Evil...
Papi curang, padahal Ulqui juga pengen pake itu...
Yang itu...
Inget Servant of Evil...
Papi curang, padahal Ulqui juga pengen pake itu...
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:04 pm
@qwerty:maap, senpai
kan saya kira jelek..==
makanya buatnya tanpa basa-basi
di percepat waktunya
@ulqui : untung saya duluan..ahahaaha
kan saya kira jelek..==
makanya buatnya tanpa basa-basi
di percepat waktunya
@ulqui : untung saya duluan..ahahaaha
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by suzurin Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:09 pm
[qoute]makanya saya cantumkan di situ..
tapi dilebihkan..
Ku mohon,..
Ku mohon.. [/quote]
gyaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*nangis ngejer.maunya*
keren laaah ayo bikin yang sedih lagi ! biarkan air mata yang tertahan ini keluar ! yeaaaa !!!
tapi dilebihkan..
Ku mohon,..
Ku mohon.. [/quote]
gyaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*nangis ngejer.maunya*
keren laaah ayo bikin yang sedih lagi ! biarkan air mata yang tertahan ini keluar ! yeaaaa !!!
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:10 pm
mau yang sedih yah?
ya udah,..
saya pikirkan
untuk cerita sedihnya..naii..
ya udah,..
saya pikirkan
untuk cerita sedihnya..naii..
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Ulqui Schiffer Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:10 pm
HEH!
Awas papi!
Nanti Ulqui mau bikin lagi yang lebih bikin hati miris!!
*Semoga bisa*
Ahh, tapi masih menunggu chapter 2...
Lanjut buruan pi~
Awas papi!
Nanti Ulqui mau bikin lagi yang lebih bikin hati miris!!
*Semoga bisa*
Ahh, tapi masih menunggu chapter 2...
Lanjut buruan pi~
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Rheaffel Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:34 pm
Kalau sependek ini... saya yang tadinya terhanyut sama suasana tiba-tiba ... "Hah?! Udah TAMAT lagi!! Mana lanjutannya!!"
... ah lebay, tapi saya emang mikir gitu~ :p
lanjutkan lah nak~ bikin yang bagus yah *nguap*
... ah lebay, tapi saya emang mikir gitu~ :p
lanjutkan lah nak~ bikin yang bagus yah *nguap*
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:36 pm
saya juga gak sreg sih waktu buatnya
mau di panjang-panjangin, tapi ragu-ragu..==
jadinya begini deh
ahh..
saya sudah dapat ide sedih..
untuk bocoran RP CG dan RP sini
mau di panjang-panjangin, tapi ragu-ragu..==
jadinya begini deh
ahh..
saya sudah dapat ide sedih..
untuk bocoran RP CG dan RP sini
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Rheaffel Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:46 pm
Okayh deh... ditunggu *guling*
yang ini jangan oneshoot tamat dalam sejenak paragraf ya...
sebisanya biarkan mata pembaca mengintai isi karangan itu xD~
yang ini jangan oneshoot tamat dalam sejenak paragraf ya...
sebisanya biarkan mata pembaca mengintai isi karangan itu xD~
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:47 pm
sebisanya biarkan mata pembaca mengintai isi karangan itu xD~
haahaha, mengintai..
jadi intinya membuat penasaran yah..
baiklah, akan saya coba
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Sayoppe Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:26 am
om bodoh ! itu cerita(yang lanjutannya) bikin sayo hampir nangis 
kenapa harus mati sih ???? kenapa kematian ??? (Elean mode on)
jangan mati
lagunya mendukung banget
pokoknya LANJUTIN
jadi lemes baca itu jadinya
kenapa harus mati sih ???? kenapa kematian ??? (Elean mode on)
jangan mati
lagunya mendukung banget
pokoknya LANJUTIN
jadi lemes baca itu jadinya
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Re: Komentar tentang cerita "Raven's Unknown Past"
by Alfonze Alger Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:34 am
lagunya memang mendukung
saya kebetulan ada lagu itu, terus keingetan ama si Raven, ya udah saya pasang di omake aja..
lanjutannya gimana yah..kan Raven-nya udah mati
saya kebetulan ada lagu itu, terus keingetan ama si Raven, ya udah saya pasang di omake aja..
lanjutannya gimana yah..kan Raven-nya udah mati
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