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Comment: A Rotten Girl
by Kanako Mizuki Sat Sep 26, 2009 5:03 pm
Maaf saya baru bikin sekarang.. Tadi komputernya dipake^^
(OL pake iPhone lemot pisan!)
Inta bikin cerita-berbahasa-jelek lagi.. Judulnya A Rotten Girl..
Saran sih.. Coba bayangin kalo Sandie itu anda^^
Di tunggu komennya.. Cuma tolong jangan pedes2 ><
(OL pake iPhone lemot pisan!)
Inta bikin cerita-berbahasa-jelek lagi.. Judulnya A Rotten Girl..
Saran sih.. Coba bayangin kalo Sandie itu anda^^
Di tunggu komennya.. Cuma tolong jangan pedes2 ><
Kanako Mizuki- Member
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Re: Comment: A Rotten Girl
by Ulqui Schiffer Sat Sep 26, 2009 5:12 pm
Ihh...
Bagus lho =]
Kesannya sedih banget jadi anak itu
Sapa namanya? Susah ==
Tapi kok pendek amat yak?
<--- Pengen yg panjang *disepak*
Bagus lho =]
Kesannya sedih banget jadi anak itu
Sapa namanya? Susah ==
Tapi kok pendek amat yak?
<--- Pengen yg panjang *disepak*
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Re: Comment: A Rotten Girl
by Quartz Joker Sun Oct 04, 2009 8:19 am
kerennnnnn =)
feelingnya daped banged.
tapi seperti kata ulqui, koq pendek banged ya? *banyak maunya*
feelingnya daped banged.
tapi seperti kata ulqui, koq pendek banged ya? *banyak maunya*
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Re: Comment: A Rotten Girl
by Earl Oz Vessalius Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:52 pm
Wuoooo bagus ini! Suasananya terasa sekali walau saya hanya skimming. Sekedar saran, kalau ingin bisa memperpanjang fict, tambahkan kalimat deskriptif yang menggambarkan situasi dengan amat jelas. Bikin makin suramlah~ XDD
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