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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Wed Feb 24, 2010 5:03 pm

Yoy yoy~
Silahkan komentar omake pertama sejak PH direbuild

Lalu, ada yang bersedia jadi orang yang menerima itu permohonan gaje Zeno?

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Post by Kaz on Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:10 pm

OOC Mode
Aih aih... Kawaii desu yo~
Arara, ceritanya menyentuh hati loh xD

ylve Mode
A-arara... *blush* *narik-narik baju Zeno*
Nona mu membuatku malu dan memerah saat membacanya...
I-itu permintaanmu... Aku mau kok, menemanimu... -//////-

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Post by yuzu hime on Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:26 pm

haha kawaii banget....
mantab kali~~~~

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:22 pm

Ara ara...

Kok kawaii? *bingung*

Zeno : Uwooo~ Sylve-chanku~


Arigatou desu~ xD

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Post by Kaz on Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:01 pm

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Ah, salah...
Maksudnya terlihat 'mantap' (?) dan romantis :p

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Hueh?! *blush* ka-kau membuatku kehilangan kata-kata

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Post by Earl Oz Vessalius on Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:00 pm

Pertama, yang paling menyolok mata saya adalah kalimat berbahasa Inggrisnya:

The one who struggle 'til the end is the victor.
Ada baiknya "'till" itu tidak disingkat, biarkan saja "until". Selain itu, structure-nya juga kurang tepat. Seharusnya bunyinya gini, "The one who stuggles until the end is the victor."

At the end, I will not let us be apart. We are fated to be together after all.
Karena tidak ada kejelasan yang akurat kapan "end" yang dimaksud, maka lebih tepat tidak memakai preposisi "at", tapi "in". Kalau mau pakai "At", harus diikuti keakuratan waktu dan tempat. Misalnya "at 9 PM" atau "at school". Sudah jelas titiknya. Sedangkan "end" adalah sebuah area yang terlalu luas untuk titik. Kan ada banyak hal yang bisa terjadi dalam "end". Jadinya yang bener, "In the end, [...]"

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:58 pm

^
Hoeh? S-nya ga kepencet tah?
Dasar keyboard dodol *buang ke tong sampah*

Ulqui kepengennya disingkat
*dilempar*

Ohh gitu yah? *catet*
Horeh~ Ada sensei~ *dilempar ke laut*

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Re: Comments "Apart"

Post by Alfonze Alger on Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:05 pm

ah, keren

sudut pandangnya sebagai orang pertamanya juga cocok :D

chapter 2 lanjutkan !

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:05 pm

^
Arigatou papih :3

Ini cuma 1 chapter doang
*dilempar ke laut*

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Post by Alfonze Alger on Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:08 pm

ah

cuman 1 chapter aja ya, harusnya dibanyakin tuh, biar puas walaupun se-chapter aja

dikirain mau dibikin lebih panjang kayak yg sebelumnya

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Post by Ulqui Schiffer on Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:10 pm

^
Iyah, abisnya Ulqui males *dibuang ke got*

Abis ini mau buat lagi yang lain tapi beda ceritanya

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