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~Comment~ School's Stuff

Post by Rizuku Kiryuu on Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:40 pm

Silakan yak O.O
Atashi tau sih atashi kurang atau tidak berbakat *diinjek*
Tapi atashi mohon komen-nya yah!
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Re: ~Comment~ School's Stuff

Post by Earl Oz Vessalius on Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:28 pm

.___. saya baru tahu ada chara saya di situ. Tapi kok enggak ada di dalam cerita ya? atau saya melewatkannya? ah masih part 01 =w="" Iya, silakan pakai saja, ndak apa-apa.

Komen nggak penting:
Background time: Sometime after school finishes
Yang bener: "[...]Some time after school."
Dengan kata "after school" saja, semua orang sudah tahu kalau dilaksanakannya seusai sekolah. Tapi kalau ada tambahan "finished" (ya, yang betul "finished"), itu artinya setelah Anda berhenti sekolah. X) Hati-hati dengan penggunaan bahasa Inggris, ya~

Setelah skimming, cukup menarik. Lanjutkan ya. Saya menantikan tibanya peran karakter saya. XDD
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