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Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor

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Post by Alfonze Alger Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:54 am

ooooh...*angguk2*

kelemahannya ada gak?''a

Ducan?? ditulis di historynya juga nggak pi??

hn...terserah aja sih, tapi untuk tambahan ditulis juga...ducan juga kan member deindery...head-nya harus jelas tau member2nya...
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Post by Oza hoshikami Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:56 am

menurut oya sih udah bagus..... *tuh kan gak mutu banget* Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 712674

Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 59788 dan yang mau saia comment udah dijelaskan dari pertanyaan2 diatas

heheh Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 89758 *gak mutu*
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Post by Ceil De Soir Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:57 am

GLEK?! = w =
*edit lagi*

Bentar ya pi, saya edit dulu Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 273550

Oooh....iya iya pi - w -
Saya tulis dulu anggota deinderynya

@oya: aia - w -
Oya keserobot si papi komennye
wekekekekek~ XD

Ok deh....
SUDAH SAYA EDIT LAGI!!! XD
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Post by Earl Oz Vessalius Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:09 am

Tolong ubah kalimat ini "ayahnya tertusuk di bagian jantungnya dan meninggal dalam sesaat" menjadi "... meninggal seketika".

\"jalan\"-nya
Slash... eh... garis miringnya dihilangkan saja, kenapa? Ada masalah?

Ummm... setelah baca kejadiannya... agak maksa, ya? Sebenarnya bukan kekuatan besar yang menjadikannya seorang kepala keluarga. Akan lebih baik kalau yang diniliai adalah bagaimana caranya mengatasi situasi macam itu. Kekuatan itu biasanya nomor dua yang dilihat.
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Post by Ceil De Soir Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:10 am

Slash... eh... garis miringnya dihilangkan saja, kenapa? Ada masalah?

Hah?! O.o
Saya kepencet - w - *ditabok*

Hmm...ok ok...
memang sedikit maksa...
<< kehabisan ide
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Post by Earl Oz Vessalius Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:19 am

Yah saya sudah memberi petunjuk di post saya sebelumnya. Hmm, perhatikan juga history yang telah Anda buat sendiri. Kaitkan saja dengan segala jenis pelajaran yang sudah Al pelajari sejak kecil, sehingga terlihat betul dia menerapkan ajaran guru-gurunya. Itu pelajaran untuk menjadi seorang Kepala Keluarga, kan? =3 Lupa?

Lalu, hubungkan juga dengan kelebihan Al. Oh, sekalian menambahi, tolong tambahkan kelebihan Al lepas dari ilmu sihirnya. Misalnya kemampuan berfikir logis atau kemampuan untuk tetap bersikap tenang di tengah situasi kalut atau apalah, terserah Anda. Ini sangat dibutuhkan oleh seorang Kepala Keluarga, kan?

Peristiwa besarnya saya serahkan pada imajinasi Anda.

Kuncinya hanya pada menghubungkan tiap point yang telah Anda tulis. Sebagai contoh, silakan lihat thread milik Philip sekali lagi.
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Post by Alfonze Alger Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:23 am

wah...

untuk selanjutnya saya serahkan ke sora-sen deh...Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 518317

eh iya...

itu dihistorynya kok Reisvoust terlihat jahat ya...wkwk...ganti saja sama Novadion...

baca di sini :

Keluarga Reisvoust memiliki hubungan yang baik dengan keuarga Einverd dan berusaha menjaga hubungan yang baik juga pada setiap keluarga.
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Post by Ceil De Soir Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:24 am

S-sudah saya edit lagi

Tepar.... Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 498209

Sudah saya hubungkan semuanya - w -
S-silahkan d-d-d-di...p-p-periksa

@ papi:

i-i-iya pi.... Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 680705
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Post by Alfonze Alger Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:26 am

sabarlah, tsu...Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 743428

soalnya ini jadi head of great duke house, jadi maklum aja kalau banyak yang harus di edit...
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Post by Ceil De Soir Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:27 am

I-i-iya pi - w -

Memang sih....
Saya juga nekat nih bikin jadi head segala Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 886743 *digorok*

Wekekekekekek~

Mumpung papi OL lah XD
siapa tau bisa langsung di app nanti *plak! buak!*
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Post by Earl Oz Vessalius Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:34 am

Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 602555 Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 602555 Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 602555 Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 602555 Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 602555

Ada typo:
... kemana-mana karena baginy
Kurang huruf "a".
Walau begitu, dibalik sikapnya yang selalu kaku itu, ia merasa keepian
"dibalik" tolong diubah jadi "di balik". Lalu "keepian" itu tambahi "s". Di kalimat berikutnya juga huruf "E" jangan kapital.

[quote]14.Personality : Serius , pemikir, kaku dan selalu mentaati peraturan. Paling tidak suka pada orang yang tidak menaati peraturan. Selalu bersikap formal kecuali pada teman terdekatnya.[/auote]
Ini bisa lebih dijelaskan jadi seperti ini, kan?
"sebenarnya al adalah anak yang ceria dan polos, namun semenjak ia diangkat menjadi kepala keluarga, ia berubah menjadi serius , pemikir, kaku dan selalu mentaati peraturan. Paling tidak suka pada orang yang tidak menaati peraturan. Selalu bersikap formal kecuali pada teman terdekatnya."

Kalau itu sudah beres, bagi saya cukup.
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Post by Ceil De Soir Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:40 am

Keyboard saya memang rada ngaco karena dipake untuk lomba ngetik klo CFC-an = w = *plak!*
GOmenasai... Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 598157

Nah...sudah dibetulin semua....tinggal anda periksa kembali master - w -
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Post by Alfonze Alger Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:57 am

hm...

APPROVED

kasian saya sama tsu...:p...wkwkwk
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Post by Ceil De Soir Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:58 am

Aih... Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 438568
Makasih papi~ Alleil Von Deindery - Head of Great Duke House / Legal Contractor - Page 2 381553
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